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Comment on 100: coma, interlude 23 by Steve Veilleux

Steve Veilleux — Thu, 01 Sep 2011 13:20:31 +0000

Steve,
I’ve commented much more in my head about this piece than in this little comment block, but have been immensely intrigued by this piece. Who knows, it may motivate me to re-ignite my own passion for writing.

Comment on 100: coma, interlude 23 by ninety- « undread hundred

ninety- « undread hundred — Thu, 01 Sep 2011 02:28:45 +0000

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Comment on 100: coma, interlude 23 by Krista

Krista — Sun, 28 Aug 2011 21:46:09 +0000

Intrusting way to end it. I thought for sure the main character would have been killed by Thor.

Comment on 100: coma, interlude 23 by susan

susan — Sun, 28 Aug 2011 17:19:52 +0000

It has been interesting and the stories here intriguing, Steve. I hope you do choose to continue these and share them This one is poignant and rich with images of human emotion.

Comment on 94: coma, interlude 20 by Susan Ersinghaus

Susan Ersinghaus — Tue, 23 Aug 2011 06:36:43 +0000

Fuck dear, you are getting really good.

Comment on 87: coma, canto 30 by eighty one- a puddle named unhappy « undread hundred

eighty one- a puddle named unhappy « undread hundred — Wed, 17 Aug 2011 19:57:33 +0000

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Comment on 88: coma, canto 31 by Marcus Speh

Marcus Speh — Wed, 17 Aug 2011 07:42:28 +0000

this spoke to me.

Comment on 87: coma, canto 30 by susan

susan — Mon, 15 Aug 2011 19:24:02 +0000

For me, one of your best.

Comment on 85: coma, interlude 17 by susan

susan — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 14:13:46 +0000

There is a wonderful rhythm to this, it rolls out like humming tires. There is an underlying urgency–created by your skill with pacing the poetry–that also reinforces the steady race towards the end, the future. Nicely done, Steve.

Comment on 42: coma in cantos, canto 3 by 86 petals II « p art ici patio n

86 petals II « p art ici patio n — Sun, 14 Aug 2011 10:14:52 +0000

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